First of all, I would like to point out two major aspects of this webnovel:
This is a slice of life novel.
This is a fluffy romance novel.
Since this is a slice of life story, it stands to reason that the events would be somewhat random, without any major drama or tension. Yes, the pacing is a bit slow, but its supposed to be that way. So, criticizing it for doing the things it’s supposed to do is a bit wrong.
As for the romance aspect of the story, there’s plenty of it. This is a slice of life story at its core, and it tries to show the romance between two people who can’t be honest about their feelings in a very unique manner. But, we do see the two slowly fall for each other. That’s the whole premise of this story to see how the villainess changes chapter by chapter. And, the story will end when she changes completely.
As for the writing style of the author, I can only say that, I have read a lot worse. The writing is pretty good considering that this is a webnovel. Writing a novel is very hard, so give the guy some credit.
Now, for my translation, you are always welcome to criticize my translation. I am always trying to get better, and I am very regular in my release schedule, I have been that way for two years, and plan to continue as long as I humanly can. So, I would be grateful if you point out any mistakes you might find, I will gladly fix it.
To sum up, read this novel if you enjoy a slow paced fluffy romance story.
That’s all from me.